It's not bad, but for a segmented run, there's a lot of little mistakes that just shouldn't be there. For example, at 3:13 in the second video, you walk towards the door, then turn around. There were a number of places where you pause randomly, or walk around instead of spinning.
Also, why did you break up segment 2 like that?
I'm going to redo the intro, so dont worry about that one.
As for 3:13 in the second vid, time doesnt really matter at that point (night of the final day), which is why I walk instead of spinning, which gets quite annoying when youre doing it constantly. Also, the reason I go towards the door is because I pressesd Z too early to center the camera and the game didnt register it, so when I moved the stick to go forward, I went towards the door instead. As for breaking up the Deku Cycle, I thought the time limit on YT was 10 minutes, and even the fastest Deku Cycle takes llonger than that, so I broke it in two before finding out them limit was 15 min. Personally, Im satisfied with my Deku Cycle.
I'm gonna redo a few segments today or tonight, and I will hopefully upload again this weekend.